Flex Your Writing Muscles: The Times of Diwali
This is part of an ongoing series that I recently started here, “Flex Your Writing Muscles,” (installment 1) where I take a writing prompt and work it, knead it, pound it … and see what emerges out of it.
In this case, my prompt was to begin with the words “When I was [insert age]” and to write about a memory of that age. I actually started this prompt a year ago, around Diwali, at my desk at work in between tasks. I’ve been playing with it for a while and finally made a small breakthrough today.
The Times of Diwali
Diwali in Bombay
When I was seven
We drove along Marine Drive
My face pressed
Against the grimy glass
Of the bumpy taxi
In my lap a gift-wrapped box
Of store bought jalebis
Sticky orange
Sugary sweet
Circles of delight
Topped with edible aluminum foil
The streetlights
Papa and Mama told me
Were like Her Majesty’s Necklace
A sparkling string of diamonds
I half-listened
Mostly ignored
Because to me
These lights were winking stars
My new friends in the night sky.
My sister and I wore
Matching chanya cholis
Tailor made
Long red, green, and white skirts
Short matching blouses
Polyester and silky
And chamki chamki shiny shiny
Chiffon dupattas
The sequins twinkling
Like the exploding fireworks
On the horizon.
Diwali in New Jersey
When I was twelve
Mama and Papa brought us to America
Where we celebrated our first festival of lights
In a new split level colonial
On a silent cul-de-sac
Later our evening would be interrupted
With the crackle of hand-held gold sparklers
The boom boom of pink and yellow fountains
And the whoosh of bottle rockets
But first Mama polished
Her silver bowls and plates
With smelly medicinal cotton
Filled the gleaming utensils
With home made pista barfi and cashewnut halwa
Rose petals and milk
Red vermillion and grains of white rice
My sister and I wore new sweaters and underwear
Off the rack from K-Mart
She lit the candles
I switched on all the lights
And together, the four of us sat cross-legged
To pray to the goddess of prosperity
For good health and long lives
When the chanting ended
I closed my eyes tight
And conjured up
The image of the green queen
From my new textbook
In this new land
Where Her Majesty’s necklace was nowhere to be found
I pictured the upright Lady floating on an island in the water
Holding up a bright lamp in her hand
I bowed down before her sparkling flame
The goddess of my new life
And wished for a few
New good friends.
October 29th, 2008 at 4:39 pm
“Circles of delight
Topped with edible aluminum foil”
I hope that was silver – not aluminum, or even aluminium.
October 30th, 2008 at 4:41 am
Ah, but from a kid’s point of view it was aluminum foil, that stuff my mom used to use to cover dishes and leftovers. Though you’re right about the silver: http://jivdaya.org/is_your_mithai_vegetarian.htm – a connection I never made as a kid …
October 31st, 2008 at 2:36 pm
Oh, what beautiful imagery of light. I have read these twin poems several times now, each time discovering new visions of light, twinkling, winking, sparkling, gleaming, exploding.
“The upright Lady floating on an island” made me tear up. Thank you for sharing this, little 7-year-old Sandhya and 12-year-old Sandhya. What a sensitive, lovely child you must have been.
November 3rd, 2008 at 7:26 am
Loved your memories from childhood for Diwali. I doubt if I could ever express mine as eloquently as you.
I find that as I get older the memories of myself as a child seem to be coming in to sharper focus. I wonder if some of this is because my parents are also aging faster? Not sure if that makes sense.
My memories are of my parents making allt he Diwali sweets from scratch. The Karanjis, Chaklis, and at least 3 kinds of laddoos, all made in ghee!
My favorite memories are of the food, getting to sample sweets from friends and family, going around the neighborhood seeing the different kandeels each house had and of course the fireworks.
New clothes did not interest me so much strangely enough, but I had to have my share of fireworks.
I think I miss Diwali more as a child than as a grownup.